Step 2-2: Outline 4 Ideas

Expected Time: 30-60 minutes

Now, let's consider some examples before you decide what to write about.

Example #1

What's the story? Teaching Ellie to swim.

What are the key details? I worked with her all summer, she was scared, wouldn’t put her face in the water, last day she finally tried it. I didn’t feel frustrated and really wanted to help her. Pool was quiet that day, a little overcast, she was playful and trusted me.

How did this change me or what did this mean to me? This was the first time I felt like I taught someone something. I want to do that again, whether as a swim instructor or in other aspects of my life.

What characteristics does this reveal about me?  Patience, trustworthy, supportive, 

Example #2

What's the story? Robotics competition

What are the key details? This year we almost won the State championship. Our coach always told us to focus on one important thing at a time. Under pressure, I remembered that advice and encouraged my teammates to follow it. We worked so well together. Even though we didn’t win, it was our best year yet.

How did this change me or what did this mean to me? I know how to focus and lead others. I apply the lessons I learn.

What characteristics does this reveal about me? Calm, leadership, inspire others, grit, perserverance


How to Stand Out

You can write your essay about any topic, but it's important to choose one that helps you stand out.

That means picking something unique that reveals something meaningful, different, or special about who you are.

Topics to AVOID or be careful with:

  • Sports Injuries: Many students write about these. It's hard to make your story unique.

  • Grandparent Death: Common topic. Only write about it if you focus on a unique angle, like a skill or experience they helped you gain.

  • Big Trip: Can come off as privileged. Be cautious.

  • Sports Wins: Winning a game doesn’t usually show deep growth or reflection.

  • Mental Health Issues: Only write about this if you're past it and can show growth. Still, it can raise concerns for colleges.

  • First Love: Too personal. Colleges don’t want this kind of story.

  • Personal Confession: Avoid sharing anything illegal or too private. It’s not the right place.


Open Step 2, Part 2: Outlining Ideas in the Essay Folder in the FILES tab in CounselMore. 

  • Review the experiences you listed in the brainstorming organizer.
  • Select 4 ideas that you feel are the most meaningful and that you can expand upon.
  • Consider whether these stories reveal personal growth, resilience, or a defining moment.
  • Be as detailed as possible - these are just conversation starters and don’t need to be perfect.
  • You can write about something that will be part of your activities list, but you'll want to be able to go deeper, so make sure the topic you select allows you to showcase something new.


We will discuss your ideas in your brainstorming meeting. 

Check the “Done” box in CounselMore as you complete each task so I'll know you are finished so I can review it before our meeting.